Memento Mori

It's pretty good, even though I don't understand what happened to the captain's daughter. Could you make that clearer please? Also, you could describe the past events more vividly. But ...

That explained a lot. >.> Anyway, why kill the innocent party? Yes, I read it off a book, but I agree. Also, why is a zygote not a human baby? ...

'Well, because for a simple reason which is, I have hope.' I think it should be, 'Well, for this simple reason: I have hope.' I'm not sure though. Cool story ...

That was sweet. I liked it very much. There isn't much to fix. By the way, cute name. I like the name Cabbage. Maybe I'll name my next dog that. ...

Spanking is discipline, as long as you don't hit them too much or too hard. If you do, I'd call it abuse.

Okay... About my gross assumptions: You people make assumptions too, yet you condemn me for it. Example: What if I'm adopted? That was an assumption. Also, you don't tend to ...

1) How do you know I'm not adopted? This doesn't make sense anymore. Why in the world won't they just return you to where they found you if they don't ...

I never said that the parents won't say that you should have an abortion. Anyway, I assume most of those things because I'm talking about generalities. Most people do. About ...

It's a good informative article. It's nice to know that somebody actually cares to write about abusive teen relationships that aren't necessarily physical. Yours truly, Memento Mori

It's very realistic, and the characters are easy to identify with, I'll give you that. But I agree with KJ. It doesn't really have anything of interest as you didn't ...

It's good. I think it'd be better if you had posted it in two paragraphs though. It's much easier to read that way. Yours truly, Memento Mori

It's a very mysterious and interesting start. I'd love to read the first chapter, and I'll be on the lookout for it. Yours truly, Memento Mori

It's pretty good. Just make sure your vampire won't end up cliched. I'll keep reading. Yours truly, Memento Mori

I'm somewhat confused. I read it twice, and I still am. I can't tell who's who. Maybe I just didn't read it properly. o.0 Yours truly, Memento Mori

That's very true. But think about the future as well: If people found out you decided to abort instead of taking responsibility, what would they think of you? If you're ...